WK3- Participation- Pier Coments

Matthew MensherFebruary 12, 2014 at 5:27 PM (On Austin’s)

The pitch looks nicely laid out but could probably use a few things. I would suggest adding color to either the background or to the headings. I also think the title should be centered and have your name under it like the example.

Matthew MensherFebruary 12, 2014 at 5:30 PM (On Alex’s)

Your pitch looks like an exact copy of the example other than the text itself so its hard to give suggestions. Maybe you could provide links to the similar games. You could color the title or possibly make your own original theme.

Matthew MensherFebruary 12, 2014 at 5:35 PM (On Evan’s)

Good use of an image. Your pitch being 2 pages could be possibly harmful; you may want to condense because these are supposed to be short and concise. You could add color, sub headings, your name, and center the title. Even mention that it is a pitch.