Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 5:41 AM (on John Aromando)
Very cool assortment
of pictures and well organized. Make sure not to leave out any colors from your
swatches; in the second one you are missing all of the reds, oranges, and
yellows.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 5:48 AM (on Brian Eisenberg)
Very cool landscape
pictures. Make sure you don't leave out colors; you are missing the red and
yellows in the second board, and the yellows in the third as well. Don't just
get one of each color as well but the ranges of shades/hues. The character
image could probably be a little better chosen because it is really just a
sketch with the apparel to the side.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 5:52 AM (on Fishman, Matthew B)
Make sure not to leave
out colors and hues; looks like your missing the yellow in the first, the
bright green in the second, and all of the green in the third. Otherwise, nice
job.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 5:55 AM (on Olivia Gutierrez
)
Nice boards; only
thing I could say is make sure you get all the ranges of a color, and the green
is missing from the first board.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 5:59 AM (on Khan, Daniyal N)
Pictures are cool,
looks like your missing a solid amount of colors on the first 2 boards.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 6:01 AM (on LeClair, Evan D.)
Very well done, plenty
of colors swatches and intricate landscapes.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 6:03 AM (on Ralph Perricelli)
Looks good to me,
plenty of swatches, neatly layed out and organized too.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 6:07 AM (on Joseph Verducci)
Looks good to me,
plenty of swatches. Possibly flaws are that all the scenes/levels look very
similar. And there isn't one picture that really focuses on the "playable
character" of the game. Well, if there is its hard to distinguish if its a
dinosaur or one of the people.
Matthew MensherFebruary 27,
2014 at 6:09 AM (on Alex Weitzner)
Very neat landscapes
and boards. You are missing an image of the "playable character
though". And as Professor said in class, make sure you get all the shades
of a color and not just one of each.
Response to Peer Advice
Based upon the feedback I have received on my mood boards there are just a couple things I would change. It appears I have done well at grabbing a vast amount of shades of colors and displaying them nicely in swatches. To get a better feel of the levels I should add a few more pictures per board and add swatches accordingly. I could probably find a more suitable island picture as well.
