Tuesday, February 18, 2014

WK3 Deliverable: Game pitch revised


6 comments:

  1. Kinda squeezed in the text for the bottom image. Make use of the white space at the bottom more too.

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  2. Format looks clean and nice. Good use of an uppercase, bold and colored font for titles. I can't seem to grasp how the image at the bottom is related

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  3. I like it, but you should not leave so much empty white space.

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  4. Everything looks great except. The URL's could be positioned better but honestly I wouldn't know how to do so without screwing up the rest of the design.

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    1. Replace the period in my comment after "except" with a "that"

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  5. I really like the layout of this piece. It is aesthetically pleasing to the eye. The only thing that throws it off is the "Overview" title. It's significantly smaller then the others.

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