PROJECT 4-Participation (my comments)

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 1:55 PM (on John Aromando’s)

Good use of color and contrast. I like how the images make your eyes move through the page, first on the right of the text, then on the left. I think the second image has been distorted, the font should be changed so that the paragraphs are not in all caps, and the font should not be center justified.

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:08 PM (on Brian Eisenberg’s)

Wow, this is very visually appealing. I like the way the pictures and text make your eyes move back and forth. The font color over the black makes good contrast. Changes: bold the sub-headings, and the first picture is a little too small compared to the others. And I don't know if using Runescape's color scheme and border is beneficial or not because it is in fact theirs.

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:14 PM (on Fishman, Matthew B)

Good use of backdrops behind the sub-headings. I don't like the red color or the all caps in the "games like it" section. The size and shape of the picture make it so it could be arranged differently, as in I feel like a wider picture would make more sense where you have it placed. Maybe capitalize "pitch document".

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:18 PM (on Khan, Daniyal N.)

Very interesting design, but I think there's a little too much going on to distract from the information. The "T" logo looks cool, does it stand for "tag" even though the title is "Laser Hide And Seek"? The hide and seek title has poor contrast as well. Cool font and use of images though.

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:22 PM (on LeClair, Evan D)

Very good use or color, contrast, and borders. Changes: remove bold from main text, add space between the overview text and the border, and the right column text looks too narrow.

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:27 PM on (Ralph Perricelli )

Something just looks off with the gradient color scheme. Maybe you could round the edges around the white space to mesh into the border better. The second column has no sub heading. Maybe bold the picture caption.

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:31 PM (on Joseph Verducci)

The black and white theme does provide for good contrast but a little color probably wouldn't hurt. It looks like a lot of large paragraphs of plain text that might turn away a reader. It is very sequential as well; your eyes see the picture quickly but for the most part it just moves straight down the page. Maybe not have every sub heading centered in the page.

Matthew MensherFebruary 20, 2014 at 2:36 PM (on Alexander Weitzner)

Good use of white space and 2 column view. I like the borders around each sub section. Alternating color between heading and text is nice as well. I feel like the title should grab more attention, maybe underline it, make it larger, and/or pick a different font. Add your name, and that picture looks like flag football without the football lol.

The other students did not have a week 3 deliverable done.