I think the way you made the fire effect is pretty nice. Maybe you could add a way for the words to enter the screen and then have the fire effect start. (Fishman, Matthew B)
The colors are much better now. Good use of many frame changes and changing the angle of seeing the symbol come together. (Khan, Daniyal N)
Good use of having the words enter, emphasized, and then removed. The gray fuzz is done really well and the changing backgrounds are nice. (LeClair, Evan D.)
Simple but nice. The entrances are all fine, maybe you could just add one more effect occur in the sky. (Ralph Perricelli )
Chris is right; it needs to be a little more pronounced. Maybe you could add some sort of font size effect where the logo starts small and then dramatically gets bigger, or you could do something with individual letters. (Joseph Verducci)
I like the gradual "spinning" effect of the background. I don't think a background fade to white effect is beneficial to end with. (Alexander Weitzner)
Response/Self Evaluation
I need to go back and make sure the volcano image fades in fully. I think I would also edit a few more frames so the translation is more smooth. I think I could add a different backdrop that could have some sort of moving effect or fade into another image.
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