Sunday, March 30, 2014
Friday, March 28, 2014
Tuesday, March 25, 2014
Project 8 Participation
John Aromando: The angles look fine. Just bland.
Autstin Demos: fine
Fishman, Matthew B: The floor is enlarged too much. There should be more than 2 panels of wood.
Ralph Perricelli: Fine
Joseph Verducci: Perspective is fine.
Alexander Weitzner: Fine
Autstin Demos: fine
Fishman, Matthew B: The floor is enlarged too much. There should be more than 2 panels of wood.
Ralph Perricelli: Fine
Joseph Verducci: Perspective is fine.
Alexander Weitzner: Fine
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Monday, March 24, 2014
Sunday, March 23, 2014
PROJECT 7-Participation (due March 25th)
It seems like the transitions are too quick; all the effects happen a little rapidly. I like the effect where the shadow grows. (John Aromando)
I think the way you made the fire effect is pretty nice. Maybe you could add a way for the words to enter the screen and then have the fire effect start. (Fishman, Matthew B)
The colors are much better now. Good use of many frame changes and changing the angle of seeing the symbol come together. (Khan, Daniyal N)
Good use of having the words enter, emphasized, and then removed. The gray fuzz is done really well and the changing backgrounds are nice. (LeClair, Evan D.)
Simple but nice. The entrances are all fine, maybe you could just add one more effect occur in the sky. (Ralph Perricelli )
Chris is right; it needs to be a little more pronounced. Maybe you could add some sort of font size effect where the logo starts small and then dramatically gets bigger, or you could do something with individual letters. (Joseph Verducci)
I like the gradual "spinning" effect of the background. I don't think a background fade to white effect is beneficial to end with. (Alexander Weitzner)
I think the way you made the fire effect is pretty nice. Maybe you could add a way for the words to enter the screen and then have the fire effect start. (Fishman, Matthew B)
The colors are much better now. Good use of many frame changes and changing the angle of seeing the symbol come together. (Khan, Daniyal N)
Good use of having the words enter, emphasized, and then removed. The gray fuzz is done really well and the changing backgrounds are nice. (LeClair, Evan D.)
Simple but nice. The entrances are all fine, maybe you could just add one more effect occur in the sky. (Ralph Perricelli )
Chris is right; it needs to be a little more pronounced. Maybe you could add some sort of font size effect where the logo starts small and then dramatically gets bigger, or you could do something with individual letters. (Joseph Verducci)
I like the gradual "spinning" effect of the background. I don't think a background fade to white effect is beneficial to end with. (Alexander Weitzner)
Response/Self Evaluation
I need to go back and make sure the volcano image fades in fully. I think I would also edit a few more frames so the translation is more smooth. I think I could add a different backdrop that could have some sort of moving effect or fade into another image.
Tuesday, March 18, 2014
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Project 7 - presentation
I looked at Olivia, John, Brian, Ralph, Evan, Alex, Joe, and Matt's animated game logo and discussed them.
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Tuesday, March 11, 2014
Project 6 - Participation (my comments & my response)
I agree with Brian,
the shadow should probably be shifted a little to the right or left. The font
works though. Could possibly use a thinker outline or more contrast with the
background. Idk if I like the fuzziness/clarity of the background as well.
Font works, contrast
is good, color is pretty good, back drop is amazing. I like the location of the
title too.
I really like the font
and coloring of the word "light". Good contrast, simple and elegant.
The fire is amazing
and the font clearly goes well with it. Only thing I feel like you could mess
around with is the shade of red and texture.
I really like the
colors used and the patterns within the shapes. However, the contrast with DNK
and the rest is terrible, too much going on, maybe thicken the outline. The
"Global Studios" needs a more tropical green to fit in as well.
I like the color theme
of different blues, and the font does fit the name. There may be a little too
much going on (shadows and bleeding) or just not enough contrast/outline.
You could use a little
more spacing between the 2 words. And if the font effects are gonna be simple,
(which is fine) it could use a symbol or backdrop to spice it up.
Very good use of color,
alignment skills, and the yellow/golden swirl really adds to the title.
Simple and nice. I
like the yellow with the blue and how the 'L' also acts like an underline
effect for the entire title.
Response to Comments
After reviewing the two comments on my game logo, if I were
to revise it I would look at a few more font options to give my title a littler
darker of an impression. I think a logo
or backdrop would definitely spice the title up. I would like to add an animated volcano that erupts
and oozes lava. The fire effect around I
believe the other Matt’s title would work well with mine as well.
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