Matthew Mensher

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 5:41 AM (on John Aromando)

Very cool assortment of pictures and well organized. Make sure not to leave out any colors from your swatches; in the second one you are missing all of the reds, oranges, and yellows.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 5:48 AM (on Brian Eisenberg)

Very cool landscape pictures. Make sure you don't leave out colors; you are missing the red and yellows in the second board, and the yellows in the third as well. Don't just get one of each color as well but the ranges of shades/hues. The character image could probably be a little better chosen because it is really just a sketch with the apparel to the side.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 5:52 AM (on Fishman, Matthew B)

Make sure not to leave out colors and hues; looks like your missing the yellow in the first, the bright green in the second, and all of the green in the third. Otherwise, nice job.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 5:55 AM (on Olivia Gutierrez  )

Nice boards; only thing I could say is make sure you get all the ranges of a color, and the green is missing from the first board.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 5:59 AM (on Khan, Daniyal N)

Pictures are cool, looks like your missing a solid amount of colors on the first 2 boards.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 6:01 AM (on LeClair, Evan D.)

Very well done, plenty of colors swatches and intricate landscapes.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 6:03 AM (on Ralph Perricelli)

Looks good to me, plenty of swatches, neatly layed out and organized too.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 6:07 AM (on Joseph Verducci)

Looks good to me, plenty of swatches. Possibly flaws are that all the scenes/levels look very similar. And there isn't one picture that really focuses on the "playable character" of the game. Well, if there is its hard to distinguish if its a dinosaur or one of the people.

Matthew Mensher February 27, 2014 at 6:09 AM (on Alex Weitzner)

Very neat landscapes and boards. You are missing an image of the "playable character though". And as Professor said in class, make sure you get all the shades of a color and not just one of each.

Response to Peer Advice

Based upon the feedback I have received on my mood boards there are just a couple things I would change. It appears I have done well at grabbing a vast amount of shades of colors and displaying them nicely in swatches. To get a better feel of the levels I should add a few more pictures per board and add swatches accordingly. I could probably find a more suitable island picture as well.